Murder On The Strike Of Five
Hello everyone,
I have just finished writing an historical whodunit called Murder On The Strike Of Five. It is set in the Russian Revolution of February 1917.
It is my first full length novel and I am looking for some feedback - particularly from members of the forum who have some experience of Russia and/or Russians. It is quite an easy read of just over 88,000 words (including a few in Russian) and it has been carefully edited and checked for typos.
If your feedback is positive, I intend to submit it to the 2016 Debut Dagger Prize at the Crime Writers Association.
If anyone would like to be a test reader please send me a direct message with your email address and I will send you a PDF copy.
Thank you!
MP Peacock
I have just finished writing an historical whodunit called Murder On The Strike Of Five. It is set in the Russian Revolution of February 1917.
It is my first full length novel and I am looking for some feedback - particularly from members of the forum who have some experience of Russia and/or Russians. It is quite an easy read of just over 88,000 words (including a few in Russian) and it has been carefully edited and checked for typos.
If your feedback is positive, I intend to submit it to the 2016 Debut Dagger Prize at the Crime Writers Association.
If anyone would like to be a test reader please send me a direct message with your email address and I will send you a PDF copy.
Thank you!
MP Peacock
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Murder on the Strike of Five is now available for Kindle:
Congratulations MP Peacock. Have downloaded a sample and at a quick read I'm impressed. Well done.
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Don't worry about your first draft and being a perfectionist. It is a draft - a FIRST draft. Write your story first. Getting it down to completion is the most important thing. It is then that you edit, and re-edit, honing your story and dialogue until it's perfect. The editing time is when you find what works and what needs more work! In fact the editing is when your story really develops and becomes polished. Indeed, you may even have other ideas for plot, red herrings etc. Also, your characters will be better for going on the writing journey with them.
I started with the simple idea of a murder mystery set in the Russian Revolution (it is the centenary next year and I thought that might be a good hook for marketing). I wanted to write a classic whodunnit with diamonds, gold, and Russian aristocrats on the run. I did some initial research into what happened to the Imperial Russian gold bullion reserves in 1917 and had enough to get started.
I chose to focus on six or seven main characters and their backstories - I think that readers feel more invested in what happens to the characters if they know some their background. Once I had the characters sketched out I planned a time line and about 50 chapters that would take them from childhood to Moscow 1917 and then day by day on Trans-Siberian railway to Vladivostok.
Once I had all 50 chapters each with a short, one sentence description of what happened (e.g: Ch 11: Tatiana discovers Alexander was somehow connected with her father's death, Ch 21: Dinner day 6 on the train- Julia gets threatened by Tokar, Ch46: denouement, Ch 50 Arrival at Vladivostok) I started at chapter 1 and worked through every chapter to the end of the book.
I did "sprints" one hour for each chapter, about 800 - 1000 worlds. I didn't care about quality or style, I just wanted to write the basic story. So no internet research, no telephone, no Facebook, no radio. Just writing. One hour at a time. If the chapter wasn't finished I left a note about what was missing and went onto the next chapter, another one hour "sprint*, next chapter, another one hour "sprint" ... all the way to Vladivostok..
Then I went back to the start and polished and improved the story, did a bit more research. In previous projects I had spent more time on research than writing and had never managed to finished a novel. I combined some chapters and deleted a whole section that felt more like a thriller than a whodunnit.
I showed it to some friends and got some feedback from a couple of people in the community here.
I kept rewriting it until it was good enough to send to agents.
None of the agents were interested, they all seem to want authors with more than one book to their name. So eventually I decided to self publish and get on with writing my next books. These are both historical whodunnits, one set in a castle in Scotland in 1910 and the second set in a wedding in Italy in 1911.
I hope that helps.
Let me know when you are ready for some feedback!
MPPeacock
Murder on the Strike of Five:
https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/153712675X/
If you have already read it then don't forget to leave feedback, questions, doubts and criticism here in the forum.
I think I'm going to set the story aside and begin this whodunit/suspense story. Well, here goes another unfinished story in a stack of other unfinished ones. I fear that with this other story idea I have conceived in my mind won't work either
have you written an outline? Telling the whole story in one or two pages will help you focus on the plot and the important characters.
Once you have written the outline you should show it to some trusted friends. Get some feedback. Make some changes. Show it to a few more people. Listen to what they say.
...then divide the story into scenes... These will become chapters or parts of chapters. Just write a brief introduction to each scene. For example:
"CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE
Depending on your story you will probably have between 30 and 40 scenes or chapters... Maybe more if it very complicated! Each chapter gets a brief description of the key events or dialogue that must happen in order to move the story along.
At this stage I found writing short descriptions - both physical and emotional - for the main characters very helpful. Like the cast of a film.
once your chapters are sketched out you can start at chapter one and write the opening.
if you get stuck, leave chapter one and go onto chapter two. You can finish chapter one later.
if you have the whole story planned you ever need to get stuck.
(in theory anyway )
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